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Wednesday, May 30, 2007

SHADOWS... In U i SEE another ME

District out of electricity- is a normal case in assam no doubt bout that.Not even a week had elapsed after I reached my home town for vacations dat our dearest ASEB( “the” Assam State Electricity Board) started showing its true colours, after a week’s continuous supply in my welcome lolz.
Snapp… electricity out.. gone… zzzooooo power off
My dearest ASEB always has such nuisances to offer me .. aaaah irritating.it gets on my nerves..
Hot weather and … fans out of power...
O god!! How worse can it get for resting kids who r back home for funtime n relaxation.!!
In my view.. I think..the electricity board has taken “CHANDA MAMA” for granted..
Every moonlit night .. they snap off the power considering ppl of the district can survive on moonlight.. how stupid of them..
Irritated .. I went out!! In search of cool breeze..
Leaning on a wall, an unused torchlight in hand..
I faced the MOON… and the SHADOWS fell behind me.
A thought struck my poetic cerebellum.
And there I went scribbling down a poem..

SHADOWS…. In U I see , I see another ME.
Well.. ASEB whatever .
U irritated me , made me lodge complaint..
But at last proved to b a blessing in disgrace for me.. heheh
I realized.. I found a new topic for my next piece of poetry..

Here it is……

SHADOWS
….. In U I See, I see another ME



Partial darkness or say a dark patch
Whatever u call it
Unabolished it is, unaffected by any scratch.
Run Run Run.. try running away
Neither ur soul nor ur physical self can escape it
It wont leave ur side
Onto u its strongly tied
SHADOW- its ur soul guide.



SHADOWS----------sHaDoWs
Blind , deaf, dumb they are
Speeches they don’t entertain
Even ur shadow
Is unaware of ur name.
Still.. o shadow
In u I see, I see another ME
Our second selves our shadows be.


SHADOWS------------------sHaDoWs

U direct them,
They instruct ur mind.
Dark it is,
With a hope so strong.
Never can they b blamed
Coz for society
its u (not they)who will always seem to go wrong.
Still In U I see,I see another ME.


SHADOWS-------sHaDoWs

Shadow- a lifetime companion
Like an eternal love it holds ur hand.
In funtime or in seclusion
More close than a best friend it stands.
In u I see, I see another ME


I fanc’d its feet
Reversed and came to meet.
An image view of mine.
There lies behold.
Another world beneath me thinks,
Shadows are………..
Speechles, inarticulate
With thousand mysteries, untold.
Still In u I see, I see another ME.



SHADOWS---------------sHaDoWs
I faced the moon
The shadows fell behind
I tried touching the……
I tried catching me……
All my efforts were in vain.
I wanted to feel them
I refrain.
Our representatives our shadows be
In u I see, I see another ME.


Sometimes I feel..
I feel dat praising the dark
Isn’t done, is noxious.
Then realized
How wud an infancy turn to a matured adulthood
How wud one know wats light.. wats wrong wats right.
If eyes not felt a spark
In the dark.

SHADOW- a mirror image of urs
Its ur identity.
Still in a shadow I see
I see another ME.


O SHADOW!!
The fickle world has enough for me
FRIENDS , FOES all I hav seen
Of all in life
For ur non-demanding, selfless fellowship
Sumwhere life gave me
another reason to survive.
SHADOWS----o-----sHaDoWs
U r a silent companion till my last breath
With these words for u I shall embrace death.

In my grave
Please be with me
Give me company.
For still then
Another ME..
In u
I want to see.



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......................rUcHi.. eternal happiness

7 Comments:

  • hey..there..i liked the way you started..by giving that sort but creative note there..before the poem.!

    and now some i have already posted in your post in orkut..



    i'm amazed...a little bit of speechless...
    eyes dont believe..my mind not giving my heart the support it requires...
    yaar..you wrote a splendid poem there..!

    HaTs OFf To YoU YaaRi..!

    your this so called kaviji is bowing in front of you....greatest write i ever read...and plzz..dont think that i m flattering you with my comments..coz gopal also appreciates to those only who deserves..and your this write is way beyond any appreciations..its just marvelous..above any grading system of poems, if there's any.!

    Carpe-Diem.!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 5:52 AM  

  • WOW
    that was something really mesmerising...truly by the definition of a poem - "an overflow of spontaneous emotions"
    great job ....keep going

    By Blogger saumyaa, at 12:38 PM  

  • hey ruchi dear...ab kya kahe aapke n aapki kavita ke bare mein???......words nahin mil pa rhe hein...pta to hein hi tumhe ki uper ka floor khali hain..nywazs the way u relate the soul to ur's silent companion till last breath n sm listed featureslike non-demanding, selfless fellowship n the request of ur's to be acccompanied even in ur's grave...is the most touching part of ur's poem

    By Blogger sourabh mittal, at 8:33 PM  

  • i m glad to see such wrds of encouragement. i thought i will stop writing! but its true dat like a fish cant survive without water.. same ways ruchi.. cant survive without poetry ..
    .THANKS a lot!!\\..



    .... rUcHi

    By Blogger hakuna matata!!, at 3:44 AM  

  • hey never dare to stop writing... i 'll kill u... all ur poems r a great job yaa.... get going...
    wish u all the best...
    very well done...
    i'm lovin it..hehehehe...

    luv
    ARPITA

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 11:57 AM  

  • great going...loved the way u started!!!

    By Blogger Realistic me..., at 7:16 AM  

  • yo mann!. excellent!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 8:13 AM  

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